Two wonderful stories, Meg. I loved the clue of the scent of perfume on the car upholstery -- perfume that was not hers. Men are betrayed by such little things...they can be so oblivious.
I re-read Thirsty and noticed I had left a comment before. I felt the same in the second reading. Thanks for bringing it back out. I think you should bring back others. New readers are missing your gems!
Thank you, Sharron! I should bring more stories out of archive storage. For a time I was holding off because I had plans for a bound short fiction collection and I didn't want to give away the store. But, something else even more exciting may be happening that will have to take precedence. Still waiting for the sign it's okay to post about it! Soon I hope! π€
Lovely story. The graphics rock. Welcome back! πππΊπ₯°β€οΈ
Thanks, doll!! ππ₯
Two wonderful stories, Meg. I loved the clue of the scent of perfume on the car upholstery -- perfume that was not hers. Men are betrayed by such little things...they can be so oblivious.
I re-read Thirsty and noticed I had left a comment before. I felt the same in the second reading. Thanks for bringing it back out. I think you should bring back others. New readers are missing your gems!
Thank you, Sharron! I should bring more stories out of archive storage. For a time I was holding off because I had plans for a bound short fiction collection and I didn't want to give away the store. But, something else even more exciting may be happening that will have to take precedence. Still waiting for the sign it's okay to post about it! Soon I hope! π€
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Seeing him as he really is for the first time. Well done, Meg.
Thank you, K.C.!
I suspect this wasn't the first time, but certainly will be the last.
I read it three times and feel like each time I got something I had missed the previous times! Very impressed that such a short story can feel so full
Thank you for giving my little story so much attention, Stephane! ππ₯